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Grammar and Your StoryGrammar and Your Story
There are some of us who write that aren't grammar savvy. A simple sentence can be twisted into a train wreck of words and a story into a grammatical nightmare. So I would like to take this time and be honest with you guys. I am not one of the grammar savvy. I'm not going to get into the reasons why at this point, but do know the the words I type may not be in the exact order as they should be. My comas are misplaced or non-existence. I may even leave a word of two out. I may even have the intention of using one word but use another instead. All in all, I feel really funny about doing this. However, I'm use to doing things that make me uncomfortable and hopefully this will come off informative and not a writing disaster.
In the first part of this, I'm just going to give you guys some basic grammar related story writing tips. In some of the aids listed below my tip section, they may list the exact same things. If it's repeated, then think of it a

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Cakeby ^PirateLotus-Stock

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So Tommy and I made the cake from Portal. Pretty much the coolest cake ever. I decided to share it as stock with you because it's the perfect "perfect cake" cake...if that makes sense. It just looks so awesome

It almost looks fake. We're so proud of it

Recipe here: [link]

Anyway, this cake is great. It's so delicious and moist.
Srsly.

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*Prospass Jul 27, 2011 Professional Digital Artist

Well... "this was a triumph" \o/

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^PirateLotus-Stock Jul 27, 2011

I'm making a note here: huge success

We are so proud of ourselves :*)

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~KyrieAlazen Oct 22, 2011

It's hard to overstate my satisfaction.

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~horsepony135 Jul 5, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

That looks very yummy...

and time consuming...haha.

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^PirateLotus-Stock Jul 5, 2011

Yes, and yummy!

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*Tasastock May 18, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

see, i would just be picking off all the chocolate chips that took you so long to put on.

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^PirateLotus-Stock May 18, 2011

YOU MUST EAT THEM WITH A BITE OF CAKE

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*Tasastock May 18, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

b-but.. c-cant i just have the chocolate chips??

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^PirateLotus-Stock May 18, 2011

Yes, but you must eat them from the bag!

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*Tasastock May 19, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

i can do that

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